DraftKings Onboarding Copy Redesign
UX microcopy & content design
Context
As someone who is new to the world of sports betting, I noticed FanDuel’s sign-up screens have a lot of confusing jargon. The language created a lot of friction when attempting to place my first bet. I took 2 screens and re-created what they could look like if there were better design elements in place.
The 2 screens I chose were:
Device tracking: Allowing the app to track your device for marketing purposes
Betting odds changes: Accepting that betting odds may fluctuate in real time impacting earnings
What I did
Both screens had extra copy that made the screens overwhelming. I edited the copy to be impactful with less words, and I also ensured that the copy matched FanDuel’s brand personality. I also changed colors to ensure designs followed WCAG guidelines
For the Device tracking screen, I kept 4 components
The purpose of the pop-up screen = choosing the ability to personalize your content from device activity
What customers can expect next in the flow
How customers can opt-in
Why opting in is beneficial for the customer
For the Betting odds screen, I led with 4 components.
Explaining that odds can change
Customers need to manually re-accept the odds every time a bet’s odds change and decrease.
How customers can choose to auto-accept decreased odds
No jargon or specific terms (like “move in / out of your favor” ; “switching the toggle”
The Betting odds screen was harder to parse down. It contained educational information that was crucial to understand when customers place a bet. I had to understand what the original screen wanted to convey and try to communicate the same message in a way that’s easier to understand.